I think the waist should be a little lower. The face on the whole need not be so long. You can reduce the length of the face to make her a little more pretty. The other things can be left much the same and I think you will have people falling for her!!!

Hi Brynn,

Thanks for the comments . I would like to view the blog as very much a wip as it is only a few months old and open to changes. I like the point about fireworks. Let me see what I can do.

Dhanu.

Hi all, Recently started a blog with all images drawn and finalised in Inkscape including the blog header and some blog titles too. http://festhunter.blogspot.com I think this is the correct forum to post about this. Kindly direct me if this is not the correct forum. All feedback is appreciated. Thn...