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One of my aviation related works.
Comments/suggestions welcome.
https://www.dropbox.com/s/e9foe5d9do283nu/CANT%20Z-1014.png?dl=0
Cheers,
Marco
Aviation Art
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Dillerkind
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Re: Aviation Art
Hey.
This is looking pretty good, clean and accurately drawn. There are a few small things I'd like to mention:
- the blurred highlight in the upper part of the main body seems to overlap the plane's contour in some areas. This can be prevented by clipping the blurred shape.
- the shadow of that wire-thing looks odd. The shadow of that antenna thingie suggests the light to be above, in front of and right of the plane (from the pilot's pov), hence imho the wire's shadow wouldn't be visible running down the left side of the plane.
- maybe you could add a texture to make the whole thing look more like painted metal, rather than smooth & clean plastic.
- materials reflect the light in different ways, e.g. highlights on the glass windows should be more hard-edged than those on the green body parts. Right now the whole thing seems to be made of the same material.
Hope that helps.
This is looking pretty good, clean and accurately drawn. There are a few small things I'd like to mention:
- the blurred highlight in the upper part of the main body seems to overlap the plane's contour in some areas. This can be prevented by clipping the blurred shape.
- the shadow of that wire-thing looks odd. The shadow of that antenna thingie suggests the light to be above, in front of and right of the plane (from the pilot's pov), hence imho the wire's shadow wouldn't be visible running down the left side of the plane.
- maybe you could add a texture to make the whole thing look more like painted metal, rather than smooth & clean plastic.
- materials reflect the light in different ways, e.g. highlights on the glass windows should be more hard-edged than those on the green body parts. Right now the whole thing seems to be made of the same material.
Hope that helps.
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zerocinquanta
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Re: Aviation Art
Ops, I forgot to thank you for the suggestions, sorry... thank you again.
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Espermaschine
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