Phoenix

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nils
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Phoenix

Postby nils » Wed Oct 29, 2008 1:25 pm

I had this sudden urge.... so I pulled up Inkscape. Some lines later I had this:

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Used the calligraphy tool to flesh it out a little. Perspective is way off:

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Began using the calligraphy tool to start creating the actual image. The head was first, it it's already optimized in the following image:

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The main body is what I am working on, the thing is about half-optimized right now, I am deleting about 80%+ of all nodes; you can probably tell I started with the lower side of the body:

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Each image represents a new layer, as you can see I faded the "draft" layers out but kept them for reference. I do want to keep it looking hand-drawn, without looking too jittery (my hands are not too steady, unfortunately).

It's really late at night (4:30 in the morning!) so I won't be able to continue, I just wanted to throw this out unto the forums.
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Re: Phoenix

Postby mr.manders » Wed Oct 29, 2008 5:41 pm

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Re: Phoenix

Postby Simarilius » Wed Oct 29, 2008 8:24 pm

looking good! Interesting workflow too. Look forward to seeing more.

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Re: Phoenix

Postby brynn » Wed Oct 29, 2008 8:51 pm

Awesome, nils!

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Re: Phoenix

Postby microUgly » Wed Oct 29, 2008 9:55 pm

I'm looking forward to seeing how this progresses.

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Re: Phoenix

Postby nils » Thu Oct 30, 2008 2:26 am

Thank you, guys, for the kind words.

Optimized - not much of a visible difference; the lines are smoother etc:

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Took a swing at the left wing:

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Again, the calligraphy tool is my best friend. However, while I like the look of the wing, I'll probably re-do it one more time. I think I should leave each "feather" an individual object, so that I can more easily color them individually and thus give the bird a wilder, more fiery look.
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Re: Phoenix

Postby microUgly » Thu Oct 30, 2008 1:41 pm

I really like how you've used the calligraphy tool to create a filled area for the wings feathers and then union-ed it and applied a stroke. I know it's a simple and almost obvious idea, but I wouldn't have thought to use it that way.


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