Enema!

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Linkert
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Enema!

Postby Linkert » Mon Oct 06, 2008 8:32 am

Part of the "Enema Squad" logo for a school project :D
How would you improve this?
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DenDem
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Re: Enema!

Postby DenDem » Mon Oct 06, 2008 10:21 pm

It just reminds me South Park chapter about the logo for the school team... :lol:
Its OK, but you really can improve it by adding some cool background. In addition the shadows looks kinda weird. Try to use gradient or just look at the real enema ;) and see how the shadows there looks like.
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Re: Enema!

Postby nils » Tue Oct 07, 2008 7:41 am

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Image:Rectal_bulb_syringe.jpg

There, I helped.
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Re: Enema!

Postby hellocatfood » Mon Oct 20, 2008 6:04 am

No Strokes perhaps?
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