Death Comes To Us All menu screen (updated)

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Death Comes To Us All menu screen (updated)

Postby JSoft Entertainment » Thu Apr 24, 2008 7:12 am

Finally finished the menu screen for my upcoming game.

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Re: Death Comes To Us All menu screen

Postby MavisPuford » Thu Apr 24, 2008 2:15 pm

Excellent. I think the only bit of critique I have for this is that for some reason it bugs me a bit that 007 is standing below the girl. I guess it doesn't matter too much but to me they look like they are standing side by side, but then I look at their feet and it's odd that they aren't even. Very good work though. I love it.
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Re: Death Comes To Us All menu screen

Postby microUgly » Thu Apr 24, 2008 4:27 pm

I agree about the position of the girl. Not only will look more correct if her feet are level (or just below) James' feet, it'll also make James taller which will give a better sense of who is the dominant character.

The other minor thing is that the menu text fades from grey to green. It's a minor thing, but I think it would be more readable if it went from green to grey. The way it is now de-emphasises the beginning of each menu item.

Other than that, really nice work. The overall layout and style is great and the car looks sweet.

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Re: Death Comes To Us All menu screen

Postby bwansy » Fri Apr 25, 2008 7:15 am

I agree with both. The menu text should be more readable. Overall, this looks quite professional.
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Re: Death Comes To Us All menu screen

Postby JSoft Entertainment » Thu May 01, 2008 8:24 am

Thanks for the comments guys. I'll take them into consideration. As regards the text colour, the buttons actually turn silver when the mouse is over them hence making the text more readable, and light up bright green when the mouse is clicked.

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Re: Death Comes To Us All menu screen

Postby JSoft Entertainment » Thu May 01, 2008 11:36 pm

I have added a slighly modified version to the first post.
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Re: Death Comes To Us All menu screen (updated)

Postby MavisPuford » Fri May 02, 2008 10:06 am

I think the updated one looks a lot better. The black car is very cool. Good job!
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Re: Death Comes To Us All menu screen (updated)

Postby microUgly » Fri May 02, 2008 10:17 am

It's only a subtle difference with the girl moved, but it definitely helps. The black car is far more striking. Great work.

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Re: Death Comes To Us All menu screen (updated)

Postby JSoft Entertainment » Fri May 02, 2008 7:25 pm

Thanks guys. I'll go with the new version then. I myself thought the black added a bit more class to the car hence the change in colour. The gray car didn't really stand out that much before. I only used gray before since thats the colour of the majority of Bond cars. Gonna have to edit the game loading screen and DVD cover to match the new design then. Will post when completed.

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