Squid

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Joshua
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Squid

Postby Joshua » Sat Apr 05, 2008 5:25 pm

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I've been working on this little guy for a couple days now (between work and school). I'm looking for comments/crits.
Which do you like better?

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Re: Squid

Postby prkos » Sun Apr 06, 2008 12:14 am

I like the first one better, I think you could even throw more color, maybe some dot pattern

anyway it looks great
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Re: Squid

Postby Joshua » Sun Apr 06, 2008 6:49 am

I also had thought about adding spots! :D

My final intention is to use this as a real time game sprite (probably Silverlight), so I wanted to keep the image as 'simple' as possible.

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Re: Squid

Postby microUgly » Sun Apr 06, 2008 7:53 am

I agree with pkros, the first one looks the best and even more colour could be used - but I can appreciate the need to keep it simple if it's going to be small.

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Re: Squid

Postby MavisPuford » Tue Apr 15, 2008 2:37 am

I agree. The colors are great. Even more would be better. But if it's going to be a small sprite, it wouldn't really make sense to go crazy on the detail, so I guess it depends on the size of the sprite. Looks great though!
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