Red Bear

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ahref
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Red Bear

Postby ahref » Sun Dec 23, 2007 9:38 am

hi,

Ive been messing around in inkscape for quite awhile now and have created this bear

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its a WIP and i thought i would post it :D.

some critique would be great

thanks

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prkos
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Re: Red Bear

Postby prkos » Mon Dec 24, 2007 4:26 am

Nice looking teddy bear :)

The only thing id change is the shape of the mouth, make it a bit more round at the corners
just hand over the chocolate and nobody gets hurt

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Re: Red Bear

Postby ahref » Sat Dec 29, 2007 6:39 am

ive been in touch with an arty friend of mine about this drawing and its shading ive included the improvements hes suggested aswell as rounding the mouth :D

heres the newer version which i err forgot to crop but meh

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Re: Red Bear

Postby microUgly » Mon Dec 31, 2007 12:26 pm

Cute :) Nice work on the shadow.

One thing I would suggest trying is tweaking the stroke. I think a standard stroke is a little boring so if it was my bear I would convert the stroke to path then change the shape and thickness of the outline in some areas.


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