Alright, I've been working on this part for about an hour or so and can't seem to make it look right. I've even made a face guide to ensure that the eyes and ears were aligned and the mouth and nose were centered and no good. I'm not sure what I need to fix to get her face to look right.



Other parts of the image, the flowers, the hands, the hair, I'm sure I can fix. I've also added some shading but also not finished. My main issue is the face. Once I have a face that looks right, then the rest is just adjusting the details.

And yeah, that's a different eye floating in the corner, just in case I wanted to try the other style.

This image is a trace from a sketch I made a few months back and her face sucked in the sketch too . . . Dunno, it just looks off and I can't seem to avoid "clown mouth"

I think I would move the nose a little to her left. as for mouth I guess i would just make the bottom lip a little fatter or the top one thinner. The lips looks like it should be mirrored on the X axis and rotated. But if it were me I would play around with it until satisfied wit results. it looks like a good start though.

I know you posted about the face, but you should think about the effect gravity would have on the contour of the breasts.

dgimse wrote:I think I would move the nose a little to her left. as for mouth I guess i would just make the bottom lip a little fatter or the top one thinner. The lips looks like it should be mirrored on the X axis and rotated. But if it were me I would play around with it until satisfied wit results. it looks like a good start though.

Heh, yeah, after staring at it for 30 minutes, the nose dawned on me. I repositioned and rotated it a bit and that created a vast improvement. I've also changed out the eyes and fixed the mouth a bit.

Working on the other problems and I'll post the finished work when i finish.

As to the breasts, I suppose I could deform them a bit for gravity.

Thanks

As she currently is:



Disregard the hair for now, that's my next step.

I would also bring the ear down to where the top of the ear aligns to the point of her right eye.

not possibly, but (NSFW) lol, i just got fired thx to u. :[