My first web comic

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Soleille
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My first web comic

Postby Soleille » Fri Jan 22, 2010 11:19 pm

Hello !

I'm a beginner. I would like to create cartoons using Inkscape.

Unfortunately, my drawings don't look good... especially when I shrink the pictures but there are for sure other reasons. Here are the my first two drawings :
http://www.andrejorge.info/divers/bd/premiere.png
http://www.andrejorge.info/divers/bd/visage.png

Can you tell me what's wrong with it and how I can improve ?

Thank you ! :)
Last edited by Soleille on Fri Jan 22, 2010 11:22 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Soleille
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Re: My first cartoons

Postby Soleille » Fri Jan 22, 2010 11:21 pm

Sorry, I forgot to tell where I found the tutorial to make my first comic. Here is the url :
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3M3LMAZS ... re=related
:)
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jommarjohn
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Joined: Wed Feb 03, 2010 6:59 pm

Re: My first web comic

Postby jommarjohn » Wed Feb 03, 2010 9:36 pm

I think you made a good start with your new web comics, maybe I can suggest to you to add more characters.



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