PacMac

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chief80
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PacMac

Postby chief80 » Fri Mar 23, 2012 12:00 pm

Please tell me what you think! :D

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nesDk
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Re: PacMac

Postby nesDk » Fri Mar 23, 2012 9:51 pm

nice work

a couple of things.
i believe the aluminum frame can be seen all the way around the screen.
small edge around screen.
if you incorporate the apple topbar and small stardock, i think it would look more complete.
and finally a small "outer curb" on the overlay reflection and turning down transparecy on that element would make it more subtle and "design like"

oh just found an example, that kind of shows what i'm aiming at.
picture did'nt work well as image_post, too big.

nice work, please don't take my words as an attack on your work. just my opinion and suggestions to make a good layout, a great/awesome/epic layout. ;)

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Re: PacMac

Postby chief80 » Sat Mar 24, 2012 10:06 am

Hi nesDK! Thanks for the constructive criticism! I like most of your points, but I just wanted to show you what I used as a reference. It's a little different than the one you are showing me :)

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