v1nce wrote:The tools on the belt are too "vertical" they don't follow ths skirt
Not that I've ever seen a tool like those, lol. But I think the vertical line of the tools indicates that they have weight, which is what one would expect of a tool with a metal (presumably steel) blade and wood handle. If they followed the line of the skirt, they would look lightweight, or maybe even plastic. I could see them following the line of the skirt, a little, if she were in a very active pose (like a kung-fu kick or something), which would emphasize movement. But there is very little movement indicated.
Neither am I familiar with the subject, the character or source of colors. But you could not go any darker, without losing the cool pattern on the sleeves. Already I have to look at the full size, to see the details. Again, not that I'm a fan of this subject, but I do recognize skill with Inkscape. In that vein, I was thinking it might look cool to replace the sleeves with tatoos. So that it's more of a sleeveless dress, except for a cap sleeve (short sleeve, there's a pointed thing there, if you look at the full size, that could be called a cap sleeve). Then the arms would be tatooed with the pattern on the current sleeve. And neither am I a fan of tatoos, and I doubt one would ever actually see such a tatoo in real life. But it's a cartoon anyway.
If I changed anything, I would make the cube.....either be a little more reflective, or maybe even have a slight glow.