Five-Minutes Nightscape

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Five-Minutes Nightscape

Postby nils » Mon Aug 18, 2008 12:50 am

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It needs stars and maybe some minor tweaks. I think for a 5-10 minutes job, this came out relatively nice if I may say so myself.
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Re: Five-Minutes Nightscape

Postby EarlyBlake » Mon Aug 18, 2008 4:28 am

You did that in 5 minutes? You vector a faster than do :D Nice.

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Re: Five-Minutes Nightscape

Postby microUgly » Mon Aug 18, 2008 7:43 am

Nice work. I wish I could force myself to do simple stuff. I always take on complicated work and never finish them :)

I agree that some stars would really finish it off.

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Re: Five-Minutes Nightscape

Postby nils » Mon Aug 18, 2008 5:08 pm

Thanks for the kind words.

Well I didn't look at the clock ;-) But it didn't take me long. Really easy:

- Background is a rectangle with a gradient on it which fades from orange/red to a dark blue to an almost black blue at the top
- lower half is solid black; I simply drew a line across and around, then duplicated the background and used Path -> Intersection to get a bit that fits the drawing
- The pine trees: I drew the left half, cloned it and flipped the clone horizontally, combined the two parts and removed nodes that didn't fit, then cloned it a bunch of times resizing and changing the shape
- The leafy trees were the most work, I created one, cloned it twice and changed the clones around a little to make it not too similar (I still think you can see that it's the same basic tree).
- The moons are simple again; create two circles, make an intersection for the dark part and a difference for the lighter part; clone and change colors lightly so I get three moons

-> Done.

I am using four layers, in this order, low to top:
- Background
- Stars (so far empty)
- Moons
- Trees


I'll add some stars later today, and see how that comes out.

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Re: Five-Minutes Nightscape

Postby nils » Mon Aug 18, 2008 5:19 pm

Cloning as in duplicating.
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Re: Five-Minutes Nightscape

Postby brynn » Tue Aug 19, 2008 2:51 am

Awesome piece of work, Nils!

I always take on complicated work and never finish them

LOL! I have this problem too!

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Re: Five-Minutes Nightscape

Postby nils » Tue Aug 19, 2008 4:42 am

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Re: Five-Minutes Nightscape

Postby nils » Tue Aug 19, 2008 4:46 am

And with a slight blur on the moons and the trees:

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Let me know which is better, and if there's anything else I could improve I'll appreciate the feedback.
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Re: Five-Minutes Nightscape

Postby microUgly » Tue Aug 19, 2008 10:07 am

I like the blur on the trees because it's so subtle you barely notice it. But I think the blur on the planets is too much. I would expect that the planets is the focus of the illustration so they should remain in-focus. You could probably try blurring the trees a little more to emphasise this.

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Re: Five-Minutes Nightscape

Postby nils » Tue Aug 19, 2008 3:29 pm

Hmm, good point, thanks. I'll try it and see how it looks.
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Re: Five-Minutes Nightscape

Postby nils » Wed Aug 20, 2008 1:36 am

How about this? I used a "compromise" of sorts - I kept the blurred moons, but duplicated them and removed the blur from the duplicate. This gives them more contrast, but keeps a slight blur for effect. (I probably could even increase the blur a little.)

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Re: Five-Minutes Nightscape

Postby brynn » Wed Aug 20, 2008 7:23 am

I kept the blurred moons, but duplicated them and removed the blur from the duplicate. This gives them more contrast, but keeps a slight blur for effect.

That's brilliant! I wish I could think of stuff like that.

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Re: Five-Minutes Nightscape

Postby nils » Wed Aug 20, 2008 9:15 am

Uhm, thanks, I am not sure it qualifies at "brilliant" but hey, if it works, it works.... And a last update, I wanted to remove the dark blue "inner" part of the moons.

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Re: Five-Minutes Nightscape

Postby microUgly » Wed Aug 20, 2008 9:30 am

You most recent version is the best. Removing the dark from the moon was a good idea. And I like the blur around the moons now--they're no longer out of focus, instead their just glowing.

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Re: Five-Minutes Nightscape

Postby nils » Wed Aug 20, 2008 5:26 pm

Cool. So it's really and truly "done" now.

Thank you all for your feedback, it helped a lot!
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Re: Five-Minutes Nightscape

Postby blaz_boy » Tue Sep 09, 2008 12:42 pm

i think it so cool , and i have an idea
why don't u make some overall effects like
some white splash circles in the corner
or an alien staring from the corner to the viewer .. and make it radio active
or maybe u can put the start to make some kind of a horoscope
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Re: Five-Minutes Nightscape

Postby nils » Wed Sep 10, 2008 3:20 pm

...I don't think so.
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Re: Five-Minutes Nightscape

Postby blaz_boy » Thu Sep 11, 2008 3:05 am

as u wish, it's your design
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Re: Five-Minutes Nightscape

Postby nils » Mon Sep 29, 2008 7:23 am

Well, it's just a landscape. Mutant aliens, weird effects, or astrology would seem very out of place. :-)
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