a goth girl... X3

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BRAXS69
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a goth girl... X3

Postby BRAXS69 » Wed Sep 17, 2008 2:40 pm

shes still very much incomplete, but i decided to post here what I've done so far. any crits and suggestions are more then welcomed. :D

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Re: a goth girl... X3

Postby microUgly » Wed Sep 17, 2008 2:46 pm

Nice drawing. I really like the colouring on her shirt and the distortion of the logo.

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Re: a goth girl... X3

Postby brynn » Thu Sep 18, 2008 5:24 am

Nice!
My only comment would be that I think she would look hotter with a little more muscle in her upper arms. Nothing like body builder, but just a little more. Unless you intend her appearance to be gaunt. If so, you've hit the mark.

You're clearly a very talented artist. Thanks for sharing!


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